Showing posts with label Collaborations. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Collaborations. Show all posts

Wednesday, October 31, 2012

Ritual

Kealie and I wrote a short story, that's turning into a longer story. Hey, we work well together, once we get going. Anyway, here's a snippet and the cover I designed!



“My Lord! The Lady Cora! She is outside the gates.”

“Well, then let her in!” Dmitri wasn’t at all sure why Carlton was in such a tizzy. “I cannot, she seems to have collapsed at the gates, and I will not be able to gather her in time before the sun rises, my Lord!”

Clarity hit Dmitri like a hammer upside the head. In a blink he passed Carlton in the doorway. “Which gates?” His voice barely an echo as he blew past the old man. “The front, Sir!”

Even though he was already down the hall and up the stairs, he heard Carlton’s words as if the man stood next to him. Dmitri felt the prickle along his back that heralded the beginning of the rise of the sun, and knew, “No time, no time.” He’d never make it to the gates and back inside running.

He stopped moving, took a deep breath, and stood still long enough to focus. Dematerializing he cast his particles through the air to the front gate. He materialized just outside the gates, grateful the sun was still low enough on the horizon to provide enough shade that he could stoop and snatch the bundle of what appeared to be clothing crumpled at the base of the pillars holding the wrought iron gates guarding his compound. He took another deep breath then dematerialized again, holding the precious cargo, before the sun could rise further and burn his sensitive skin.

Dmitri materialized directly inside the front doors of his home. While short exposure to the sun wouldn’t kill him, it would burn a bit. And too long, and he would wish he was dead. Then again, he was old enough the sun didn’t have much effect on him any longer. Cora on the other hand…

Winded he leaned back against the wall beside the door and squeezed his eyes shut as he tried to catch his breath. In his slightly weakened state, he shouldn’t have been able to manage such a feat as two dematerializations in such quick succession, but his powers had a mind of their own when it came to the female in his arms.

Dmitri gained control of his breathing and gazed down at the woman in his embrace. Her face was obscured by the hooded cloak she wore, so he shifted his hold on her to move the folds of fabric that he might see her face. He lost his breath again when he saw the condition she was in.

The normally plump, vibrant woman he knew was nowhere to be found. Instead, in her place was a pale skeletal imitation wrapped in threadbare oversized clothing. Her skin stretched tight over bones and sinew, but the bare evidence of the muscles along her arms told him that she wasn’t yet beyond saving. Her hair, usually a lush and shiny gold, was dry and straw-like in consistency and color.

“Oh, koshka, what have you done to yourself?”

Tuesday, November 30, 2010

What to do?


Megan and I have been working on something together. Something that we are truly excited about and it's something that will hopefully be a series (since we already have four books outlined and in the works...). I'm not sure how many of y'all are involved with a collaboration in your writing, but this is the first time for me. I've been a Crit Partner, and a sounding board... but a partner in the entire process? Nope, not really.

The first story we're working on is one that came from Megan's brain. She wrote the basics, the characters, where she wanted them to go and handed it off to me. This is how we decided to do it, and it's working rather well for us... at least I think so. Maybe we should ask Megan. Anyway, there have been times when I thought the storyline should go one way, and wasn't sure I was seeing that in her plot... so I asked. She said it was "fine... change away... it's yours too." Okay. But I get the feeling that Megan isn't sure it's going to come out as what she wrote, while I add to what she did give me and go from there, I'm trying to leave the core of the story and the same scenes and movements...just with MY flair added to Megans. Does that make sense?

The story is slowly coming along, and we burn up the wires across country as we IM back and forth and ask questions and make comments and try to move forward. I don't want to do something with her characters that I have to adopt a bit, that she didn't want to happen to them... I think I'm meaner than Megan is... maybe... hmm.

Does anyone else have suggestions... ideas... for working in a collaborative effort with another author you adore and admire? Tips? Or do you think what we're doing is good if it's working for us? And, aside from my slowness, it is working, I think. Let me know what y'all think! It's going to be awesome if we can ever get it finished.